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Analysis of "Outside Fargo, North Dakota" by James Wright

Original poem reprinted online here: "Outside Fargo, North Dakota" by James Wright
Originally read: December 29, 2012 (Am I missing a day? Too lazy to go back now) 
More information about the Poet: James Wright


So in my notes I write that this poem works on two levels -- Internal and Meta:

"Internal:  The next lines "'onely / and sick for home.' the images above feel[s] like a representation of internal strife: white horses, going into the shadows, a sprawled body derailed."

"Meta:  The poem turns from observational to internal -- nothing too surprising.  But the line 'I nod as I write good evening' is the only physical response of the speaker to anything -- and his physical response turns inward to the poem and the speaker."

Past me, I don't think you fully describe meta that well.  So the speaker of the poem writes about the creation of a poem.  And all the symbols and images lead to how a poem is created.  And I could see it in this poem -- the match, a representation of an idea; the play of white and shadow, a Jungian aesthetic; a physical call/a written response.

However, if this poem is meant to be read as meta -- well that's another story all together.

I didn't notice this on the first read or when writing my notes, but I picked up on this when reading this again: "I strike a match slowly and lift it slowly"  Now, on one hand, "slowly" is a waste of words.  Grammatically, isn't an adverb used twice here redundant?  Yeah, I guess so.  However, the focus is on every individual action.  Not an observation per se, but one action at a time in the first stanza.

I write this because I wonder to write individual tasks through adverb without being overly redundant.  I'll still wonder.



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