Original poem reprinted online here: "Dispatch Detailing Rust" by Adrian C. Louis Originally read: January 29, 2013 More information about the Poet: Adrian C. Louis So this is the first poem that I'm analyzing for this blog which has both narrative and lyrical elements to the poem; furthermore, the elements are so distinctly separate that I feel that there's a progression of intent for the reader and the speaker. The first stanza is narrative where the speaker details the experience of seeing his "enemy's hand" and "gloated." So breakdown a little bit, the first half of this stanza has character development (speaker has an enemy and doesn't think him/herself old until as old) -- however, within the first few lines the speaker identifies himself as a visual speaker and how attention oriented he/she is to the point that near the end of the first stanza the speaker realizes his/her own hands are just like his/her enemy -- or rather the enemy...
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