Poem Found Here: "The Long Hand Wishes It Was Used" by Jackie Clark "Sometimes I wish I didn't think in words". For me, this is a powerful opening line that holds potential emotional weight: wishing for something so mundane as words, but so complex as thought. But instead of words, what? The following three lines add a cumulative effect, not only how to think, but also the technique of repeating "and" to put a simple addition: and that instead for each thought I thought I drew upon an image, and that I was able to organize each image in a linear way that would be like sort of like reading and that instead of trying to describe the edges around something I could just think of the color around the edges of the image to be darker, So the cumulative effect focuses on the concept of lines -- the border of the image. To "organize each image in a linear way that would be like sort of ...
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