Poem found here: "Bavaria" by Mary Ruefle "umlaut of a cloud" is what drew me to this poem. Not only is it an interesting visual but also made me want to look up the concept of an umlaut in which I was looking for a symbol. And then I ran into this sentence about the description about an umlaut: "Umlaut is a form of assimilation" Now I know I'm overstretching as far as analysis is concerned, but I would like to think that the "umlaut of a cloud" brings a sense of assimilation to the village below and the clear skies above. It's just this cloud that is different. After this sentence, it feels that it should be a semi-colon to attach the next part to the first, but actually, the "separation" of ideas is more important here, "The little girl wore yellow gloves" A simple sentence but it stands out -- should it? There's a sense of defiance based in color I guess. But the last three lines make the poem for me: ...
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