Poem found here: "April" by William Carlos Williams The poem, in my head, alludes to T.S. Eliot's, "The Wasteland" with the famous line, "April is the cruelest month." The response though starts with a proposition, "If you had come away with me / into another state / we had been quiet together." There's interesting techniques used here. First, the reader doesn't know who this "you" is, and, adding to this ambiguity, the single line of "into another state" could refer to a physical or mental place -- but the end result would've been a "quiet together." But the poem goes into the opposites -- or expectation of opposites with the conjunction of "but" leading turns within the poem through a single word -- conjunction or adverbial phrase.. "But there the sun coming up / out of the nothing beyond the lake was / too low in the sky." Note this first usage of "too" in the p...
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